No, I didn’t speak to Elizabeth Taylor or Michael Jackson.
- But, then you probably knew that
- Their message was in a brief blurb in the morning paper
- We really should slow down and read what’s in front of us
The article was in the paper the day after the legendary film star, Elizabeth Taylor, died. Here is part of what it said –
“Elizabeth Taylor’s family mourned the screen legend in a brief private funeral service at a southern California cemetery famous for being the resting place of Hollywood celebrities, including her good friend Michael Jackson.”
What I thought I read –
Elizabeth Taylor was mourned by family and Hollywood celebrities, including her good friend, Michael Jackson.
- I was outraged
- How insensitive
- What shabby journalism
- Everyone knows Michael died last year
- I’m an idiot
Okay, maybe that last statement is a bit harsh, but it is what I felt when I realized that I could not have read it right. I read it again and did the mental slap to the head.
Scan Alert
What did it tell me about readers?
Readers scan text and miss key points.
And here I thought they hung on every word.
I know, the concept is certainly not new, however, it took a mental image of Michael coming back to life to underscore the challenge of delivering a message.
If I make that kind of reading error with a newspaper, is it any wonder I have difficulty with online reading?
Why Achieving an F on Online Layout is a Good Thing
Research tells us that the reading pattern for online reading is F-shaped.
We read across the top, then move down to about mid-page and read across. Finally, we scan down vertically from the top left to roughly form the letter F.
No matter what science says, the bottom line is online layout must be simple. You know how I love simple.
- Put your key information in the top two paragraphs
- Use concise sentences
- Use headings and subheadings
- Use bullet points
- Highlight with bold text and links
It’s time I practice what I preach. I plan on going back through older post and creating better page layouts.
I don’t want anyone raising pop star spirits from my text.
What ideas do you have for obtaining an F grade?
Good lesson…for writers AND readers.
Hi Kim: You noticed I didn’t say anything about my baby boomer eyes. 🙂
Thanks for stopping by!
You’re right, Cathy about how some “innocent” positioning of words can convey a ‘not intended meaning’ to readers.
Thanks for sharing effective layout pattern that works.
Cathy,
You’ve raised some wonderful points about readers. After thinking about it, I guess I tend to do that too. Like your suggestions about sub headers & bullet points. Gives the readers a point of reference which they will most likely read. Short paragraphs are also a must.
Val 😉
Hi Val:
Thanks for stopping by. I do appreciate it. One I didn’t include that my boomer eyes definitely need comes with headings – LARGER text. 😀
Thanks again for coming by and sharing your comments. Hope to see you again.
Hi Stella-my rude Akismet threw your comment in spam. Now that you’re approved, we won’t have that problem. Lord knows I appreciate comments and don’t want to throw them out! 🙂
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